Fantastic First Fifty from Year 1

Steve the ogre lived in his tree top house.  In the middle of the night he heard a loud noise.  He went down to find a letter from the trolls.  They asked for his help to find a magical flower that can save their lives.

Lilly, Year 1, First Fifty, Rykneld Primary School

 

One day an ogre was in a cave.  He looked in the forest for a magical flower that would make him stronger and faster. It was high in a tree.  The children got a ladder and climbed into the tree to get the flower for the ogre.

Noah, Year 1, First Fifty, Rykneld Primary School

 

One day Jack and Kate were picking fruits from the trees near the forest.  They saw light coming from the forest, they go closer to the light and saw a friendly ogre.  He was dripping sunlight on the flower from his watering can.  Now they knew who was growing the sunflowers.

Hashir, Y1, Fantastic First Fifty, Rykneld Primary School

 

One day the ogre saw a flower.  He saw a flower glowing.  Tom and Jill walked to the forest.  The children saw the ogre and tried to hide but he saw them and they ran away home.

Zahra, Y1, Fantastic First Fifty, Rykneld Primary School

 

It was a dark day.  I am terrified but I will be brave.  I tiptoed in the haunted house. I can hear thunder and lightning, I don’t like it.  There was a big tail hiding behind the door…

Mia, Y1, First Fifty, Rykneld Primary School

 

It was a stormy day, I was walking past a haunted house and I heard a phone ringing.  I felt brave in the night.  I heard a noise and it was a zombie howling at the moon.

Alice, Y1, First Fifty, Rykneld Primary School

 

Once upon a time, there was an ogre who lived in a swamp.  One day some children picked a flower for him.  The ogre didn’t have anything to put the water in for the flower.  Suddenly, one of the children gave him a cup.  When the ogre put the flower in the water, the flower started glowing.

Harper, Y1, First Fifty, Rykneld Primary School